A part of my prologue . . . any good? It's only a bit, but it's long . . . sorry!?

This is really good! Sorry this may seem over critical, but to me it seems as if there are too many names to keep straight. But even as it is, it's great and you had me sucked in at: “Where’s Stailee?” asked the faerie, tramping up and down, his head lowered in agitation, his hands locked behind his back. His wings seethed with black and gray and dark purple colors, glittering ominously.