What do you think of this so far?? (not long)?

okay, at first,, it sort of sounded like shane wests character in a walk to remember.. idk if youve seen it... he gets in trouble and must particpate in the play with a girl he's known for a long time... and doesnt really notice her until working and practicing for the play with her... but then i noticed the differences.. i like it so far you should keep going!